WhoWeAre:Stage2Status/TakKendrick
NotYet I agree with what both Patty42 and Julia are saying. The problem here is that neither the mission or vision clearly explain what the organization's purpose is (mission) or what we as a community think the organization is going (vision). I don't mean these in terms of the company "AboutUs" but the living, breathing community that the company serves.
- That said, I just made a few "radical" shifts to the language view the history that tried to repurpose the mission and vision. I didn't touch the "values" or "unpacking the mission, vision and values" sections, because I didn't have a good sense of what changes would be good there. Am excited to see someone else take a swing at both my edits and the other sections.
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